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Going away from me

– अशान्त ·

– Ashant ·

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You are going away from me
Showing no regard for my feelings
Erasing every mark I cherished
Leaving all the love without trailings

Every breath I smelled of you
Every finger touch I felt of you
My moments which witnessed you
For the love of life I liked you
Shared my bits with you
I love you!!!!
You are going away from me……………

Tearing apart my heart you go
My mobile even missess you
My inbox is nowdays blank
I can feel emptiness surrounding me

If you had to do this
Why did you take so long
Ignited the fire
And then threw water on
Evidences are in great number too
I love you!!!
You are going away from me…………….

Classes are not at all amazing
College sucks and I feel leaving
You doubted self and now doubt I
Cannot decipher you did it why?

World was cruel
But I was with you
You had to gruel
But I was with you
I think that was not enough to show
I love you!!!
You are going away from me………….

Everyone asks me about you
My placid face tells the tale
I try to sustain every pain
Can’t let go things in vain

Woman gets hard
With the breaking of bond
Its art of man to bear it all
Can’t you change
This monotonous trail
I love you!!!
You are going away from me……….

My eyes are dry but heart is wet
You are ruining what is already set
There’s nothing which forces you
And about that I can bet

Read the lyrics which I never wrote
Hear the songs which I never sung
Appreciate the pics which I never drew
Travel the places where I never went
Perhaps you may feel
That love is to be felt and not to be showed
But, You are going away from me…………..

Prashant

– अशान्त

– Ashant

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4 responses to “Going away from me”

  1. Anonymous avatar
    Anonymous

    going away is not a process to be beared by one person only….if the feeling is true the other person can never be untouched…. the feeling of emptiness engulfs is unable to bear with……… and it is more so when a person has nothing to cherish in any way when the moments to be cherished are momental… when it becomes clear the life is a solitude marked by dry chilling breeze of negativity and brooding defeat at every step….its not cowardice or developing cold feet.. the feelings are to be felt within but what about the reality… reality does not and can never wash away the feeling but yes its manifestation become difficult at times… it has to be understood in the light of circumstances present before the person….its nothing of \”love\” its just about life…

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    Anonymous

    Why do 'circumstances' come to trouble only those who r in love? Why don't these 'circumstances' give some food for thought to the real trouble makers? Why do people have to go away because of these 'circumstances'? Why isn't anyone prepared to firmly face these bloody 'circumstances'? Isn't there anyone strong enough to fight these 'circumstances'? Has everyone lost their guts before these 'circumstances'? Have the promises become so fragile before these 'circumstances'? Why the people who are not at fault have to suffer because of these 'circumstances'? Can't all these people come together to demolish these 'circumstances'? The determination also seems to be weak before these 'circumstances'. My determination is still rock solid. But the problem with such battles is that u can't win it all alone. You need your partner to be with u. I have been left handicapped at this front. I need u to be with me, as the battle is a fierce one. How can u not live the life that we had imagined? And how can I not live that very life? I need to do something. It seems I'll have to do it all alone. I'm geared up for it. If u can come along, please do come. And if u cannot, its your fault. Please don't blame 'circumstances' for the lack in your strength and determination. I'll keep fighting till me last breath, no matter what the result is… because I don't want to die saying that I did not sincerely fight against the 'circumstances'.

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    Prashant

    @my anonymous readersI feel delighted from the fact that my lines were successful enough in invoking such candid comments. Its true that sometimes life dictates the path love should take, and it is here that beauty of love starts. Two souls may be on different paths but they can always feel warmth of embers of love. It is not necessary that they forever remain along but it is essential that feeling never dies. If so happens then remains the sanctity of love beacuse love and life have always beeen and will always be different.Circumsatnces are pivotal in shaping the life. Sometimes they happen spontaneously and sometimes we create them. Isn't it that even love is the creation of circumstances most of the times?? So what becomes important is the inseparable companinoship evn if abstract rather than circumstances. I have always felt that true love can never diminish or extinguish. It always subsists despite of adverse circumstances. It is here that level of maturity becomes important because moving away with life becomes necessary. Love may happen more than once and value of latter or prior is not disparaged by existence of either. Enjoy life as there are many other duties and obligations other than love like towards our family, friends ,etc. Love shall stay forever and it springs from the feelings which never die:-)

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    Anonymous

    HEY that was really a very lucid way of explianing things. i have always maintained that u realy have that inordinate talent of expressing things… i agree with u completely that love is unconditional infact i am a firm believer myself that nothing and i mean nothing could change your feeling of love which you had for somebody even though it was momental but the only test is it had to come from within ur soul and not just by one's lips.. but can you just answer one query that what when the person whom u like or like to be with is not worthy of it.. there may be instances that a person has let down a person soo many times.. what if the person so hell bent not to change his attitude at all although he knows that he is at fault but he is undergoing a so called mental turmoil what if it does not stop??? what will u do then…

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